Rate my poem I made for my girlfriend

[Nate]

As I melt in your eyes
Butterflies fly through my stomach
words not coming out right
Have I lost my mind
Or have I truly fallen
This feeling it must be real
The sound of your name sends joy through my body
The way you kiss me
I am speechless
You are so beautiful it's unbelieveable
Remarkable I didn't think anyone could be this amazing
In any way shape or form
Your soft skin
Bright eyes
Beautiful smile
Cute laugh
Crazy hair
Outstanding style
These things never will I forget
Or regret
I know it's been tough
With many unneeded obstacles
But we over came them
And I just want to say thanks babe
I hope there is nothing but more good times to come
Because they have always out weighed the bad
I have changed so much for you
And will continue to do so
If needed
You mean the world to me
I will always be here
For whenever you
Need someone to talk to
Or just someone to hold you
What you say matters to me
Don't ever think different
Just remember
The bad doesn't stay that way forever
It only gets better
As I end
This rant of how amazing you are
I love you<3


I might of went on to much but should I send it to her

[Parasola]

very nice how much.

[Nate]

How much...

There is no price on this its words from my heart.

[kittyrawr]

Awww thats sweet!

[Moogle]

wow you must really be in love if she's inspiring you to write a poem. I can't do that anymore lol

[megafusion]

2 thumbs up

[NoLimit028]

You're an idiot.

And I didn't read your stupid ass poem.