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Post#1 Posted: 16 Oct 2011 07:15 am    Post subject: Something something I suck at something Reply with quote

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Post#2 Posted: 16 Oct 2011 08:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

My review.
Don't take offence. :]

Girl is too far over.
Rule of thirds.
She should be over a bit more to the left.
Then she just kinda sits there. There is nothing drawing her into the signature, if that makes sense.
Then you should always match the background with a color on the render[the girl].
Just doing that would bring your render more into the picture.

That's for starters. :}
And that's for my style.
But that's basically true for almost everyone's style.

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Post#3 Posted: 16 Oct 2011 12:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

seems to plain for me smile better then anything i can do though.
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Post#4 Posted: 16 Oct 2011 12:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think it's good, too plain as said, you need to put something else on the picture but I think on the sig it's the best place for the girl, on the right.
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Post#5 Posted: 16 Oct 2011 06:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I tried pulling focus towards her by using a lens flare and a twirl + smudge tool to "centralize" her. imo she has to be on the right, but now idk what to put on the left sad I mean, I don't have anything to put on the left, besides some name of some sort.. Basically, I'm at a loss.
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Post#6 Posted: 16 Oct 2011 06:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's good, but too plain. sad
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Post#7 Posted: 17 Oct 2011 06:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

more like a random googled pic tbh...
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Post#8 Posted: 17 Oct 2011 08:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I move my renders more left when I put it on the right. It helps fill the area more. And the name should be close to the render so it doesn't draw attention away from the main part of the signature, the render.
The empty space is usually what destroys me in sigs too. I have scrapped so many sigs for that reason alone.

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Post#9 Posted: 17 Oct 2011 08:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

So basically, it looks bland and plain, but it doesn't suck.

If I should put something to the left, should it be smaller/bigger ~ behind all the pre-existing layers or should it stand out more..?

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Post#10 Posted: 06 Dec 2011 09:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Your best bet is grabbing some 3d graphics from cinema4d or whatever or any other "filler" of that type. Also you could make the girl like 10% bigger and move her to the left a bit.
Also, did you ever think of just reducing the width of the sig? ; )

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Post#11 Posted: 06 Dec 2011 03:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cory wrote:
It's good, but too plain. sad


This

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Post#12 Posted: 07 Dec 2011 03:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

FistFck wrote:
Cory wrote:
It's good, but too plain. sad


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