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Giantbob LazyBob
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#1 Posted: 16 Oct 2011 07:15 am Post subject: Something something I suck at something |
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I need someone to tell me if I'm doing a good job or not. Thanks.
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PiNk ℳℯẘℳεẘ
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#2 Posted: 16 Oct 2011 08:37 am Post subject: |
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My review.
Don't take offence. :]
Girl is too far over.
Rule of thirds.
She should be over a bit more to the left.
Then she just kinda sits there. There is nothing drawing her into the signature, if that makes sense.
Then you should always match the background with a color on the render[the girl].
Just doing that would bring your render more into the picture.
That's for starters. :}
And that's for my style.
But that's basically true for almost everyone's style.
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#4 Posted: 16 Oct 2011 12:52 pm Post subject: |
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I think it's good, too plain as said, you need to put something else on the picture but I think on the sig it's the best place for the girl, on the right. _____________________
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Giantbob LazyBob
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#5 Posted: 16 Oct 2011 06:07 pm Post subject: |
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I tried pulling focus towards her by using a lens flare and a twirl + smudge tool to "centralize" her. imo she has to be on the right, but now idk what to put on the left I mean, I don't have anything to put on the left, besides some name of some sort.. Basically, I'm at a loss. _____________________ ONCETHEREWASALINKHEREANDNOWITISGONEYES
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Cory Top Donor
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#6 Posted: 16 Oct 2011 06:22 pm Post subject: |
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It's good, but too plain.  |
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#7 Posted: 17 Oct 2011 06:41 am Post subject: |
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more like a random googled pic tbh... _____________________
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#8 Posted: 17 Oct 2011 08:33 am Post subject: |
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I move my renders more left when I put it on the right. It helps fill the area more. And the name should be close to the render so it doesn't draw attention away from the main part of the signature, the render.
The empty space is usually what destroys me in sigs too. I have scrapped so many sigs for that reason alone. _____________________ Who will be your pretty little enemy?
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Giantbob LazyBob
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#9 Posted: 17 Oct 2011 08:45 am Post subject: |
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So basically, it looks bland and plain, but it doesn't suck.
If I should put something to the left, should it be smaller/bigger ~ behind all the pre-existing layers or should it stand out more..? _____________________ ONCETHEREWASALINKHEREANDNOWITISGONEYES
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#10 Posted: 06 Dec 2011 09:36 am Post subject: |
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Your best bet is grabbing some 3d graphics from cinema4d or whatever or any other "filler" of that type. Also you could make the girl like 10% bigger and move her to the left a bit.
Also, did you ever think of just reducing the width of the sig? ; ) _____________________
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#11 Posted: 06 Dec 2011 03:40 pm Post subject: |
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| Cory wrote: | It's good, but too plain.  |
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Shinlos
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#12 Posted: 07 Dec 2011 03:00 pm Post subject: |
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| FistFck wrote: | | Cory wrote: | It's good, but too plain.  |
This |
Cpt. Obvious |
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