Wix website ? lol.

[Cinemax]

Kinda cheesy, but looks decent I guess.

http://www.wix.com/watkinsservices/jwatkins

[Wish]

looks good man

[happyguy44]

you do maid services now?

[exquisite]

its decent but i suggest you to get joomla or drupal instead of a free site like that, it doesnt look so professional

let me know if you need any help

[UniqueHero]

I like it

[Cinemax]

[the_pillo]

not bad, some of your grammar was a little shaky (particularly the outside services) but other than that pretty sweet. Maybe go with a non bold typeface on the main page but increase the font size a couple pts. This will get rid of some of the aggressiveness while retaining readablility and visual hierarchy.

also on the homepage, i noticed that the pictures for the outside change to pictures of a bedroom and such. If possible make it so it only shows examples of your previous lawncare work. You have a picture of a garage and a well manicured landscaping job in your maid and janitorial slideshow. Consistency is key, definitly make sure that your pictures match the description. So all maid service pictures need to go to the made service, and any outdoors pictures needs to go to the outdoor element.

on the maid services page. Maybe break up your list of services you offer into a numbered or bulleted list. Just something nice and simple to break up the monotony. When there is an "includes" word try and indent that particular part slightly, if you go the bulleted or numbered route. This will show it as continuing the previous thought. Other than some minor grammatical flow issues, the rest seems great. If possible add maybe a slight black or grey border around your images, maybe 1px-1.5px. This can be done through CSS or actual image manipulation. For the CSS it will look something like:

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What would be on the webpage: <ul> <li> <a>  <img> </a> </li> </ul> What the Css would look similiar to: #gallery_photos{ list-style-type: none; } #gallery_photos img{ border: 1px solid black; } #gallery_photos li{ margin: 0 27px 27px 0; float: left; } #gallery_photos li a{ display: block; border: 1px solid grey; }

Your outside service page is quite nice, i mean again its grammatical flow. It is slightly off, like it reads choppily. Other than that its good to go

the contact page is bland and boring, possibly add a google map either interactive (if you have the capabilities) or a picture of muskegon with a radius of where you are willing to work. instead of just having an email link, possibly have an email script :

This is an example form for it. change what you need

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<form>    <h2> Contact</h2>    <dl>    <dt><label>First Name:</label></dt>    <dd><input></dd>    <dt><label>Last Name:</label></dt>    <dd><input></dd>    <dt><label>Email:</label></dt>    <dd><input></dd>    <dt><label> Phone:</label></dt>    <dd><input> ex: 407-679-0100</dd>    <dt><label> How may I contact you?</label></dt>    <dd>By Email <input> By Phone <input></dd>    <dt><label> Reason For Message:</label></dt>    <dd> Question <input> Comment <input> Complaint <input></dd>    <dt><label>Message:</label></dt>    <dd><textarea></textarea></dd>    <dd><input> <input></dd>    </dl>    </form>

Also not sure if it matters to you or not, but your header (the gradient picture with your company name), if you added either diagnol or vertical thing white-grey stripes. it would make it pop much more.

Hopefully this helps mi amigo


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it tooks away some key parts for some reason even though i disabled html. like you cant see the form action or the img links stuff. but you can see the jist of it

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[Kolba]

The pics are moving too fast, i mean: It's not so important to check the details on them but if they were about to move slower, it wouldn't disturb the reader, yes that's a strange point of view, i know.

[Ipad]

the rotating pics on the home page is sort of a distraction imo. You should just keep a broad/general picture of each, considering your customers need a chance to read what services you can provide, and might get distracted by the constant changing pictures. Rotating pictures might be more suitable for the subtabs, where you go into a bit more detail of each service. My 2 cents.