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Post#1 Posted: 11 Jun 2010 11:13 am    Post subject: ninja turtle Reply with quote


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Post#2 Posted: 12 Jun 2010 07:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hrm, Im at least going to try to be constructive. The grass covering the turtles neck looks odd. The rest of the grass looks very realistic. The turtle itself also looks very belivable, although edge top part of the shell and it's head seems, odd. Odd as in the very edge part of the grass is sharp but then passes over to blur. From a more complementary coloring point of view, Im not entierly sure the colorscheme on the turtle fits with the grass. However I do think the coloring on the turtle is excelent. So with that said, I want you to know that Im not a professional artist (keyword is professional) and also that my opinions does not equal fact. Im not used to give critique lol, so sorry if Im being blunt.

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Post#3 Posted: 12 Jun 2010 10:01 pm    Post subject: Re: ninja turtle Reply with quote

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On the back right leg of the turtle the shell seems to extend farther than it should, maybe curve it back a bit. keep the color though, i like how it looks and works with the final piece. The mouth of the turtle, not sure if your vision was of him eating grass but, if its not then the grass that is there doesnt look right, it seems out of place, maybe compliment it some by adding some grass around the neck region, even it out a bit so it doesnt look out of place. The shell "pentagon" near the neck (back one pentagon from the neck) looks a little wierd, maybe make it more uniform in color.

I must agree with braindead, its hard to critique lol. hope it helps though

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Post#4 Posted: 05 Jul 2010 08:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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