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 #1 Posted: 04 Jul 2010 03:20 pm Post subject: Come 'n Criticism |
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i know its really monoton and text is bad
but well the rest? cnc it
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| #2 Posted: 04 Jul 2010 04:01 pm Post subject: Re: Come 'n Criticism |
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| lucero wrote: | i know its really monoton and text is bad
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Hmm... well I'd give it 6/10, but I'm no graphic artist, and my sig isn't any better so let's give you an 8/10, because I probably couldn't do it. It looks like those premade backrounds though, I forget what they're called, and Idk who that random guy is but the text would be cooler if it was more of a lime green ?
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| #3 Posted: 11 Jul 2010 09:50 pm Post subject: Re: Come 'n Criticism |
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| lucero wrote: | i know its really monoton and text is bad
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its interesting your use of sharp lines with curvature whiter lines is nice, the biggest issue i have is nothing pops.. its all very..... not to be mean but plain. Theres nothing that immediately grabs my attention. but in terms of monochromatic its nice, maybe blend the left side a little behind the fella so that he seems to pop a little more. maybe go with a lighter font or try putting it on the rightside in the darkness away from the light side of the right.
Just some ideas, hope they help
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| #4 Posted: 16 Aug 2010 09:18 am Post subject: |
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You should lower the contrast and add some depth with blurring some parts far behind and in front of the asian guy. Also the render/stock is very low quality.
Only really like the part left of the text with some textures and blue in it. Make the rest of those c4ds (?) look like that and it would be better and less monotone |
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| #5 Posted: 16 Aug 2010 10:15 am Post subject: |
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I do not like it but 4-10
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| #6 Posted: 16 Aug 2010 12:36 pm Post subject: Re: Come 'n Criticism |
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| lucero wrote: | i know its really monoton and text is bad
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oversharpened |
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| #7 Posted: 16 Aug 2010 06:59 pm Post subject: |
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| I thought it looks a little blurry, but I'm not PS expert. |
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| #8 Posted: 17 Aug 2010 02:41 am Post subject: |
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typo is horrible, distracting, low quality.
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| #9 Posted: 25 Aug 2010 12:05 pm Post subject: |
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| Economy wrote: | | typo is horrible, distracting, low quality. |
this, 4/10 |
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0/10 lol 
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5/10
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| #12 Posted: 18 Dec 2010 08:59 am Post subject: |
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| youre getting there though, 7/10 i'd say. |
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